Feels in under 40 seconds, good job.
They say there is always room for improvement but hmm... i dont know if this applies to you lol. I have to say, that was very very nice! I like how at the end, in the chorus, the text kept on shaking, it was a nice effect. Definitely would like to see more of this. What would make it even better would perhaps be adding more color, but even if this were just different tones of boring gray, it would be an amazing kinetic typography. 5/5 10/10
The colours are intended to look greyish to emphasise rigidity and uneasiness.
hey, i liked it a lot, you definitely should make more. I agree with the others about the scenes flowing smoothly (the last parts, wen they're both blasting light at each other lol) but overll I liked it a lot. Make more pleez :- D
The game seems fun for an early stage, however, i think I found a glitch. In the level where you first see three red rings, the row of blue blocks swallwed me up and I couldn't get out of the blocks. After a second or two I practically teleported to the blue block that makes the top right corner of the box-like structure the yellow circle is in in. Anyways, I think the controls are good the way they are now, and the concept of the game seems great! Can't wait to play full version!
hm sounds like you got stuck in the physical part of the wall, I'll look into it and thanks for the review and encouragement!
simple but fun
The concept is really simple from my point of view, but the game is incredibly addicting. I find it really really fun!
Muy buena rola! Seria excelente tener mas influencia latina en el mundo de la musica electronica.
: )) Muchas gracias!
just a bit more polishing
Like dragn-dude said, needs bit more work on the volume, and if u culd make it a bit longer, it would be great. Can't wait for the full version to come out, the song sounds great even if its just a demo. Try to make the ending a little bit more subtle if you get me, here it sounded rather sudden to me, but either way, great song!!
Amazing work dude, its like you brought a dead man up from the grave. What used to be a gloomy sad song turned into an epic rave jam, its awesome! 10/10 5/5 Really liked how you increased the tempo from the original, because its not slow, but you didnt increase it to the point where it seems like a song with a tempo that is way too fast. Good job!
Wow man, I think this artwork is really nice! The shade tones you used are perfect (not sure if i'm being clear). The expression on her face (her eyes, and her slightly open mouth) give the drawing such a nice look. You're a great artist!
Thanks a lot! :J
I had a reference while on the bus, but not while I redrew it, so it's a tad disproportionate, maybe the mouth. But yeah, the design of it is kinda cool I guess :J
lol, i like your russel, now he's uglier than he really is XD, and the Noodle is nice too, like how his eyes are covered and he doesnt have that helmet/headphones thing that makes him look geeky like in 19-2000. I like it how they all look cheap : P
It seems you're completely unaware that Noodle is, in fact, of female organs.
I'm willing to forgive you for this mistake, just don't let it happen again.
looks like pro artwork to me man (it IS pro artwork), its amazing. I really like the shade/tone of green you picked, its not too bright but still gives it that... look... if you know wat i mean. What is really nice is the really light bits at the sides of the arms, its very subtle and it makees the pic look awesome. The aqua/indigo blue aura around the red adds that little touch of balance that the red needs
Wow dude!! amazing art! 5/5 10/10
glad you like man - I had to pull off a fw tricks to do this one :)
thanks for the review!
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